"VERNAL WRECKS"
Maragaret Ann Waddicor. 14th October 2010.
Crossed twigs, cracked limbs,
a nose protruding, granite mossed
sarcophagus lid, stark Winter's drought,
spilt seed pods black, antler shapes,
bones brittle, broken, bleached,
brown leaves, layered maps,
the season's robbing sap.
Bleating streams scream,
cleaned out frosted roots,
bleeding reds of fallen beasts,
scoured lake, blank face paled,
impaled bark, feathered fringes faded.
Fathoms deep, all sleeps,
weep drops of dew, sharp light, white,
wizened fronds, bracken blackened,
patterned ponds shallow,
dark moulds, mounds, abrupt sounds,
echoes cold across the waste.
Howl wolf, bark fox, squeak mouse,
cackle crow, sigh curlew slow,
torn, seared, smeared, driven,
blizzard tossed, iniquitous,
relentless vernal equinox.
Comments
I like it...
but I am not sure what ' it ', is. Is there some technical term for what you did? It made me think of the coming of winter. i guess lately everything reminds me of winter, for ours is soon upon us. Love, ~ Gee
Extaordinary
This is how it is, on the bone-end of winter, when everything the cold and snow destroys and conceals is revealed in the thaw before the warmth kicks in and things begin to grow.
You should do this one as a recording, Ann, it would sound superb.
And I love the title!
great use of alliteration annanya
just enough, not too much to be obvious.
and what a wonderful sight-see i went on with you
thank you
love and hugs
judyanne
xxxx
This is really a poem, Ann, I
This is really a poem, Ann, I love reading this poem again and again.
Thanks, friend.
Regards
Ayaz
And here you all are
And I haven't acknowledged your wonderful remarks,
and they are so too. Oh I thank you and feel somehow
privileged by you my friends.
Wonderful comments, wonderful.
Love as ever Ann.