Poem Body
Wistful wandering eyes
scattering across
the cool colorless
cloud filled skies.
Desperately
digging through
its shallow
shades of white
in search
for some subtle
sight of light .
Mar 30, 2024
Wandering eyes
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
My inspiration
My inspiration was these two songs by Joan Baez
https://youtu.be/B_K6z3HiRAs?si=aO4jPS-fpn7LCDBa
And
https://youtu.be/nADCKIT_Kbw?si=pNiB7j4VthIo9g9h
Thank you...
for sharing that with us. She was a very interesting woman in a very interesting time. ~ Geezer.
Wandering Eyes
Hello, Edward,
Simply beautiful.
L
Thank you
When I wrote it’s about finding the light or hope in the darkest hour .
Hello, Edward,
well written!
L
Digging
I love your use of words here. Visceral and well written. Thank you for sharing.