the_fool
the_fool
Jan 21, 2013

water beds (my first haiku)

Poem Body

fish finished fucking,
both breathless and soaked, must one
sleep in the dry spot?

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Austin, TX, USA

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Comments

weirdelf

and steamy.
Love it.
And reminded of why WC Fields claimed he never drank water "fish fuck in it"

themoonman

and here we are thinking water beds are cool

great imagery and focus here, title couldn't have
been better, a truly unique poem.

thanks for posting !!!