Wealth [Runic Symbol: Fehu]

Poem Body

w e a l t h is a lifetime of material and spiritual experience

About This Poem

Last Few Words: inspired by the Runic Symbol Fehu meaning wealth. Those interested in knowing about Runic Symbols may use the link https://www.instructables.com/id/How-To-Read-Runes/

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

Comments

hi raj

this one certainly has profundity in it; but I question if you need, in life.

w e a l t h is a lifetime of material and spiritual experience, this line on its own suggests that the 'wealth' is the spiritual and material experience accumulated in life.

(aside: in one of my poems the suppository for this wealth was the soul)

thank you Tyro for reading and your good words....in fact I was also contemplating a lot if or not to add "in life" ...but since you also felt that it is unnecessary...i will remove it...
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Raj

A thoughtful liner as usual. here raj, However, I agree with tyro about removing the "in life". I thought it is clear without it.
Well done friend.

thanks dear friend Rula...i

thanks dear friend Rula...i thought I had already deleted "in life"...done it now...
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