Poem Body
When folks have all the time
what are just three lines
they call it a senyru
that's no crime
they test patience
comparing with red wine
and sublime
like my visions across the oceans
I see a senyru coming
but then I promised to remain
within my own domain
and raj I can't dare annoy
nor with Ian's ideology toy
but oh boy
Barbara has forgotten me
come lets go to sea
and watch the demise of a setting sun
which has a right to rise as a reborn one
elsewhere
that's no surprise
friend rise
put a bikini on
or drop it
no one will see
all will be too busy
composing senyorary
loved
Comments
Loved
I am not annoyed as you seem to think. Everyone I believe has different perceptions and I have no issues about it....
Regards,
thanks you relieve
stress
which at times does distress
the other guys were enjoying it
so I just joined in
that's all
glad you came in
the ocean is sublime
and raj my friend is fine
he loves gin and lime ..
maybe,
may be not
but
I only love red wine
from hands divine
scotch would be fine
if payment is not mine
potato pockets
you and school guys know
loved you are a music maker,
loved you are a music maker, and your lyres deepen a conquest for intuition
i must love you for saying
such musical words for loved
ur so sweet
loved
a musical poem you have written. I havent forgotten you.
thank you so very much
and I know tis difficult to forget Loved
by most
on another site over 900 read me daily
and expect a new one every day
I can't disappoint them
but any one else may
Loved
I tried the Bikini but looked such a fool I ran into the forest and cried tears for all those that never try something new.
Loved no one is forgotten here or after here, your words and thoughts are eternal, so best think only the best of all things.
I have a few more writes to do so will leave you for a while, but as there is only Now I can never leave you once we have met here lol, Yours Ian.T