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Mar 13, 2014

Who was She

Poem Body

She came for a moment
a fleeting one
just to give me energy
Divine

she was drunk by my eyes
and like wine dissolved
into the universe
in a momentous moment

gave me the fruits of joy
men need most
of an intent
to creativity
a beautiful content
and in the eyes of god
she merged after that monumentous moment...

devoid of all love and emotion
she did vanish
why did she have to come
and
a truthful heart
a soul banish
heaven alone knows
why so!
lovely poet she was
twas..

on another site 300
have read i since
here none still!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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raj

11 years 1 month ago

Is this about the experience when an idea makes a brief appearance in your mind for a poem before quickly disappearing?

loved

on fb
some unknown gal wanted to know more about me
gave a lecture very poetic
and when I revealed portions to her
she vanished
leaving my mind in the lurch

glad u appreciated it