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Dec 21, 2018
This poem is part of the workshop:

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WINTER FUNK

Poem Body

There is no warmth outside today
when ice and sleet cover the ground
beneath a freezing sky of gray
whose cold winds set the pines to sway.
No hints of autumn are around.

For this is winter at its worst
no thoughts of spring come into mind.
Shoulders hunch, cold lips are pursed
I survey a landscape that seems cursed
a world described, at best, unkind.

And now I top a final hill,
more chore than joy found in this walk.
I'm lucky not taking a spill
tripped by some vine beside the tiny rill
or by a gimpy knee's cold balk.

I look about the bleak surroundings
and think of how all seasons end.
All winters always lead to springs
but as things always lead to things
one day I'll feel my last cold wind.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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Comments

S

I appreciate your stopping by to read this oldie which I brought back for workshop purposes.

Candlewitch

I hope you are not taking any chances on falling! Please do not do that! this is such a gloomy poem, for you, uncharacteristic of you. but it is an excellent poem. eddy said to tell you so...

*hugs, Cat
^ever, eddy styx

S

It seems lately that falling is all I do lol. But I'm tough enough to have done so with little resulting harm to anything but my ego

Candlewitch

I would be falling all the time if it were not for my cane and w-chair. You be careful, ya hear?

*hugs, Cat